Smooth Criminal is a God-like Stand similar to The World, that can tell if someone is lying, stop time for 30 seconds when at max focus, and freeze a person in place for 5 seconds at most. It's Range is a mile, and his strength is about as good as Crazy Diamond. He can almost travel at the speed of sound. His Accuracy is not terrible, but bad. Smooth Criminal's appearance looks human-like. Like how Star Platinum appears. And, his cry is: "Zorarararararara!".
30-second time stop (even it's it the very maximum) and 1 mile range. If this were a Requiem that would make sense, but I see no detail stating it's a Requiem/evolved Stand. and a B in range is a lot less than a mile.
Also, The World, by the end of part 3, has a 10-second time stop and the same speed as Star Platinum, which (I think) is slower than the speed of sound.
Unity is a stand that manifests in the form of a long wooden pole with carvings on it that show the pole touching 2 people and them fusing into one. When unity touches 2 objects (living or not) they will fuse together. Unity can be seen by anyone, and to non-stand users, unity is as hard as a normal wooden pole, and if it is broken it will regenerate in 5 minutes. To stand users unity is as hard as diamond and if broken by a stand user it takes 15 minutes to regenerate. Unity can extend the length of the pole it manifests as, and it can extend as far as needed to reach the target, even if its across the earth. Unity can extend at a rate of 60 miles per hour.
Ability #1: Human Fusion
Unity fuses 2 people together, creating the JoJo of part 8.
Ability #2: Human Object Fusion
Just creates Angelo but with different objects.
Ability #3: Human Animal Fusion
Unity fuses a human and an animal, having a 50/50 effect of the animal getting the human's brain or the human getting the animal's brain.
Ability #4: Object Fusion
Unity fuses an object together, creating an object with good parts of each object. (EX. Rocket launcher + Pistol, creates a pistol with exploding bullets)
Ability #5: Kamikaze
Unity fuses the earth and the moon together, destroying both in the process.
BEFORE YOU READ THIS I HIGLY SUGGEST CHECKING OUT THE MAIN STAND AND ORIGINAL REQUIEM VERSION! (https://itch.io/post/1404026)
Now assumingly you read the my original idea and requiem original of Black Day, I can tell you that Black Day: Shackles Of Death is precisely what would be considered the main story if it was in a manga. Although I thought since Black Day would originally be for a villain I decided I wanted to go back and make a Requiem version for if a hero possesed Black Day. This is what I came up with,
Black Day: Power Unconceded
Power: A
Speed: D
Range: C
Durability: (See ability "Imprison Harvest")
Precision: C
Potential: A
Black Day: Power Unconceded is broken down in a bit of an example;
When Black Day's user (hero version of course) was pierced with the requiem arrow their mind grew blank and all of their chains faded away, they become unconcious. In their mind they begin to hear a rattle of chains slowly repeating them selfves getting louder until just loud enough for you to make out a few sounds. The rattling will stop and you will see chains slowly wrapping around this unconcious visionary person which of course is the user. Then one last time in a perfectly audible version the rattling of the chains will pronounce "You are determined to for fill for your goal, you are unconceded. This goal is.." the user will in-voluntarily state what they wanted to most to happen before they pierced themself with the Requiem arrow. They will gain concious and their body will rapidly thrash chains way bigger and more poweful then before and incase themselves with an almost 7 meter tall titan of chains with a few two new abilities.
Imprison Harvest: This move passively activates whenever the chain titan takes a serious blow, the chains will rap around whatever hit them and disable its abilities, therefore is star platinum were to use a hard hitting ora punch Black Day: Power Unconceded would rap chains around star platinums arm and then Jotaro would temporally not be able to use his stand and since stands are physically embodiements of the souls fighting spirit, Jotaro would loose all motive to fight and would begin to cower in fear unless another stand overwrites Imprison Harvest and brings his stand back and motive to fight. Last but not least when Imprison Harvest takes place it immediately breaks down the strenght of what hit the user and incorparates in as is own therefore now it could form a solid punch with power of star platinum's on top of its own.
Power Unconceded: Now to explain how this ability works it would be better if you knew what the name meant. Conceded means that you have utterly accepted defeat and lost all hope so when you add the root "un" it means you arent conceded and by using power as an adjective you have the meaning of a power that cannot be defeated or forced to defeat. This ability is simple as Chariot Requiems soul swap move, you just cant beat Black Day: Power Unconceded unless you have a stand much like GER that can change the destiny or future much like how Diavolo saw he was going to win against Giorno but GER changed that fate.
Universal Chains: This is the last new ability you gain is that youre chains no longer abide by the rules of this universe; now this is where you can get creative. This passive ability simply doesnt care about matter going through other matter or color or light or anything. The reason this is so powerful is because you can do anything with your chains aka something that I find interesting would be making a chain so small that is could split an atom and now last time I checked when you split atoms it creative a sort of explosion or something I dont remember but thats just surface level things as in you can now make portals and black holes and all sorts of wacky things.
Now incase I didnt mention the user cannot control themselves while using Black Day: Power Unconceded so their chains act upon what goal they set in the beginning and wont stop until the goal is done or the user is killed. So you best bet if you hear the booming of something huge coming and the rattling of thousands of chains you best stay out of whatevers coming because if you dont, you're last hour strikes.
here is the description on what happens when you split an atom What happens when you split an atom? ... The energy released in splitting just one atom is minuscule. However, when the nucleus is split under the right conditions, some stray neutrons are also released and these can then go on to split more atoms, releasing more energy and more neutrons, causing a chain reaction.
My 4th stand will be based off this idk a kid person's idea, and i will put desc and form in the same paragraph to save time because shit i have school after this.
(Stand stats is at the very bottom)
Stand Name: Burn Monkey
Ability: Eh, its about heat but it's not completely focusing about only one heat ability, so...
Desc: Burn Monkey is a stand that is based of Sun Wukong from the Chinese Mythology. It has it's own original and distinguishable features such as his fiery spikey hair and his cape and scarf that is made out of pure fire. It can control heat using it's staff. When Burn Monkey is activating it's power, the staff will glow red and the edges of the staff will burst out flames. This stand is also faster due to enhanced kinetic movement thanks to its heat.
Range: 5 meters, it's a CQC stand.
Condition: Can absorb heat from various media and applications, such as a newly-made asphalt road, boiling water, sunrays, or even from a direct physical attack aswell (based on the vector theory that every kinetic movement creates heat), which minimizes the damage and boosting it's durability.
Limitation: Taking heat for too long will make the stand overheats itself and burn, and you know what happens to the user if the stand is drowned in flames. Cold temperatures and environment could also nerfed this stand's prowess.
Skills:
Kinetic Boost (Passive skill)
Burn Monkey's speed and precision is boosted due to its kinetic movement being enhanced thanks to its heat.
Heat Absorption (Basic utility skill)
Burn Monkey would take heat from any variety of media and applications, just like what's explained in the condition section.
Hot Rod (Basic offensive skill)
Burn Monkey would channel the absorbed heat to its staff, which then glows red. The staff would be so hot that if it came in contact with a material, that targeted material would be burned or melted in just a few seconds. If it's heated really hot enough, the edges of the staff will burst out flames.
A classic barrage with a finisher is a part of this skill.
Heat Absorption Aegis (Basic defensive skill)
The damage from a direct physical attack can be minimized by absorbing the heat, based on the vector theory that implies that any kinetic movement produces heat.
Fatamorgana (Special utility skill)
To prevent overheat from absorbing the heat around, Burn Monkey could spread out the heat that had been absorbed, making the temperature of the area significantly but slowly being increased. If an area is too hot, an optical mirage illusion would happen and make people in the surrounding area halucinates doppelgangers of Burn Monkey. If all of the people in the area halucinates the same illusion, the doppelganger would take physical form and became real.
In short, this skill produce clones. Burn Monkey can also replace its position with its clone, which makes teleportation possible.
Spit Fire (Special offensive skill)
Burn Monkey would flow out all out its heat out of its mouth, making the stand spits fire (literally) and burns everything on sight. For an easier exposure, imagine a dragon breathing out flames out of its mouth.
This skill needs alot of heat, like 95% of all the heat it had. If Burn Monkey were to start this skill by absorbing from 0%, it would be very risky and dangerous because it's close to the point of overheating.
Fatamorgana Aegis (Special defensive skill)
Remember when i said that the illusion of Burn Monkey can take physical form and be real? Well that clone could also absorb heat too. Burn Monkey and its clones would take in a group stance, both absorbing and gushing out all of its heat at the same time, which created a chemical reaction between the overlapsing heat and the air.
The result would be a whole energy barrier made out of overheated aura that will burn and melt anything that comes towards it, protecting anyone inside the barrier.
Welp damn, i made an OP stand, but well, this idea is based off the fusion of RHCP and Speed King, so... thats that.
This is kinda the story continuation of that Razor Sedge guy person, the user of the previous stand i made, so if you read this out of context it may be a little bit off so i suggest you read my previous stand user's story first before reading this one.
Stand User: Ardente A. Zeppeli
Age : 18
Arden is Third-year high school delinquent who looks like a fashion designer that recently joined a yakuza clan. His blonde hair fades into red and styled to look like an emo mohawk hair. He fashions a red leather jacket on top of a student uniform with two scarfs whose color is orange and white covering each other on its neck. He also wear Yeezys. His skin is pale white, and its looks pretty clear on his face because he wears a very dark eyeliners and purple lipstick.
Arden's mother owns a salon and he always helps her to ease her job everyday. His mom wasnt the only person he helped, said the whole neighbourhood. His personality is the last thing people would guess when seeing his rather intimidating looks. Although he may have a good reputation, his school life said otherwise. Well you know the glimpse, about how looks is a major trigger of being shunned in the said "education" place.
Tired of being discriminated, he started to skip school on purpose, giving him a delinquent title. He did so because he thought that the time on school is just not worth it and prefer having more time to help around the neighbourhood. Whatever the school thinks his motive on skipping school are, it's definitely not positive.
When he returned to school, no one wants to interact with him, none at all, and showed it obviously. At first, it wasnt really that obvious, people would still talk to him, while being very frightened. But now, it just really shows that people shunned him, and even starts to spread false gossips and rumors about our poor delinquent boy.
His school life wasnt his first depression flag. His father was the latest succesor of the Zeppeli family ; he resembles as gyro's son, though which he claims, unknown if it's the truth or just a blantant lie to get a financial support from the Speedwagon Foundation. His son is the only who believes his lies, due to him being a very great role model to Arden. After saying that he's going to the store to buy milk, he was never seen again. Even though Arden believed that he'll come back, his anxiety made him always thought about the possibility that he may be died, or even left the family.
When he tried to pull out the game over screen of his life, there he meets someone, the one that'll change his whole life. That someone looks like he's wearing a dark gray meander-patterned cloak, and that someone also looks like he's trapped on the ground. No, not trapped, but rather goes through the ground. And that weird person, also seems to kill an old man, that old man who always sells ice cream to the kids. Seeing someone he knew being murdered right in front of him, his anger ignored all of his depression, and sets his whole vision to the mysterious man.
Rushing to the cloaked man, he raises his fist and launch it to punch the man. But before even reaching to it, the mysterious person drowns himself into the shadow and tripped the enraged delinquent. He tried to get some balance after falling off, but then suddenly a painful jolt resonates from his chest. He had been stabbed, with an arrow-looking thing.
Before that mysterious man left, Arden heard some of his words.
"That fortune teller is really crazy. Telling me to stab anyone who saw the murder with the stand arrow, i wonder what the fuck is in his mind. Justice my ass, 'never meet me again' my ass. If you really wanted to meet me that bad, why just not come to me and not suddenly calling me on a video call, fucking old zoomer."
Confused, and in pain, Arden can't do anything but lying in the ground, dying, and hyperventilating. Slowly, his vision fades into black. He thought that this is his end.
Little did he know that he would be the JoBro who accompanies that mysterious cloaked man to destroy the yakuza clan, and actually succeeded, while having a brokenly OP stand. Epic.
Also if your wondering why don't I write it well I have the desc and stats or whatever you wanna call it but anyway I wanna see what other people do with these names/stands
Stand Name: Right Round Act 1 (An Act Stand like Echoes and Tusk) (References a song I hope you know)
Ability: Spin Distribution
Description: Right Round Act 1 is a spherical Stand about 1.5 times the size of a steel ball. It's capable of imbuing any small object that it touches with Spin energy.
Appearance: A green, spherical Stand with light green accents around its sides, top, and bottom that look like Gyro Zeppeli's facial hair. Its face consists of two pink, long, oval-shaped eyes on the front and back.
Range: 12 Meters (It's much weaker in this state)
Limitations: It's generally very small and weak, and when it comes to direct combat, it's a little stronger than a steel ball with minimal amounts of Spin. Its main use lies in its ability, able to imbue small objects (as in no bigger than a small beach ball, which is a little bigger than RRA1) with a bit of Spin energy.
Attacks
Spin Induction: RRA1 touches an object with its spherical body, imbuing it with a relatively small amount of Spin.
User: Girevole "Jerry" Pallone
Occupation: Upper Secondary School Second-Year
Appearance: Has blonde hair and light green eyes. Wears a black school uniform with a light green tie with dark green polka-dots and black dress shoes. Casually, he wears a white tank top with a dark brown puffer jacket and khakis.
Character: At this point, he's just an Upper Secondary Student born in Naples, Italy, who just discovered his Spin capabilities, as well as his Stand. What he doesn't know is that when he was young, his parents knew that they would be found and killed by a certain individual who wanted to eradicate the last of the Zeppeli family. Before Jerry's parents were killed, they brought Jerry to an old family friend of theirs who lived in Rome, and gave Jerry to them.
Shortly afterward, Jerry's parents were murdered, and the Girevole Family adopted him. They knew his lineage, but never told him in fear of what would happen. Once, he was bouncing a ball against the wall while in detention (he was never the greatest student), and began focusing on it. Spin energy began to course through his arm into the ball, and as he threw it, it went as fast as a bullet and left a dent in the wall. At that moment, his Stand, Right Round, manifested before his eyes.
Jerry is the Great-Great-Great-Grandson of one of Gyro Zeppeli's siblings (not sure if he had siblings but I would assume so), and the last user of Spin.
Later Acts to come, as well as character development.
Stand Name: Dream On (referencing the Aerosmith song of the same name aka the best song to ever exist)
Type: Long Range/Utility Stand
Ability: Materialization & Pocket Dimension
Appearance: Has the figure of a genie, human from the waist up and the legs are a white fluffy cloud. Top half is a sky blue and there are smaller white clouds around the wrists and on the shoulders. It's wearing white goggles completely covering its eyes. Its hair is white like its goggles, and it's long and flows about as if it were blowing in the wind.
Description: A genie-like Stand that can take both it and its user into a pocket dimension, and can use it for various purposes. It's able to enter others' dreams via the pocket dimension and utilize it.
Range: 5 meters (without taking into account the pocket dimension
Limitations: Items can be imagined in the dimension, but only if the user knows the physics behind the item (same condition as Momo Yaoyorozu's Quirk in My Hero Academia). If DO and its user are in another's dream, the target can imagine things to gain the upper hand, and DO is significantly weaker.
Attacks (most of these will reference lyrics from the song)
Barrage - Your average barrage, just weaker than average. Has a finisher.
Maybe Tomorrow - Dream On's cloud takes it, its user, and sometimes an item in or out a pocket dimension.
Imagine Object - While in the pocket dimension, the user can imagine an object from inside, as long as they know the science of said object. Only works with objects that exist. Larger items take longer to create. Can throw objects out of the dimension via the cloud beneath DO's torso, but needs to exit the dimension with the object.
Look in the Mirror - In the dimension, the user makes a reflection which turns into a clone of the user, and exits the dimension with the user. The clone acts off of what the user is thinking and cannot use a Stand in exchange for slightly heightened physical capability.
Dream Until Your Dreams Come True - The user takes a spear and exits the dimension with it. DO's clouds separate from its body and surround the target, then DO throws the spear, with enough force to go straight through the victim, into a cloud, causing the spear to go through another cloud, then another, and another, dealing heavy, if not lethal, damage.
(This kinda feels a little OP, but I feel the draw backs are significant enough to make it a bit weaker, but still on the stronger side)
User: Jens Molnig
Occupation: IKEA Employee
Appearance: Brown, curly hair with brown eyes. Wears an unzipped dark blue jacket and a black shirt underneath with jeans and white shoes.
Character: A 21 year-old Swedish man who lives a secluded lifestyle in the suburbs of Backa, Sweden. Talented with a guitar, though prefers not to show it. When he goes, he tries to fit in with a crowd. He spaces out at times, but he has a wild imagination. Often researches physics and the chemical makeup of the world around him.
Yeah, Since IC3PEAK is a Wendigo-like stand, i figured it might work.. Could be lethal in the wrong hands tho... But in my hands, its f r e e r e a l e s t a t e
Stand Name: Guns 'N' Roses (referencing the rock band of the same name)
Type: Mixed Range
Ability: Human Arsenal (not sure how to put that)
Appearance: A robotic humanoid figure with a skull for a head. Dressed in a black trench coat with black gloves, pants, and boots with an all-black flamenco hat (minus the tassles hanging down) and a rose in its mouth.
Description: A humanoid Stand capable of transforming it or its user's limbs or torso into various firearms.
Range: 2 meters away from user, in exchange for added range from the firearms
Limitations: Only two limbs can be transformed at a time, with limited ammo that can be replenished both manually and automatically.
Attacks
Firearm Transformation: The Stand's or User's limb (hand, forearm, whole arm or foot, lower leg, full leg) spins briefly and transforms into a firearm the user is familiar with. It has to be the same size as the weapon, meaning it has to be as long as part of an arm or leg.
Bullet Barrage: The user/Stand transforms both arms into assault rifles and empties their magazines (think Aerosmith's Vola Barrage)
Bullet Punch: GNR performs a rapid flurry of punches, each punch having the same speed and force as a bullet. Your standard Stand barrage with a finisher.
Cannonfire: A cannon erects from the user/Stand's chest and fires a cannonball. Is very lethal if not dodged.
Pistol Kick: The user/Stand's foot transforms into a pistol and kicks the opponent then fires once to a few times.
NOTE: The Stand's firearms have unlimited ammo and the Stand itself is faster, making it a better option in a more organized fight against another Stand User.
User: Carlo Tirador
Occupation: Professional hunter, secretly an assassin.
Appearance: A famed Spanish hunter often found in forests and jungles across Europe. Has brown hair and green eyes, about 5'8'', and wears a black trench coat with several pockets, black pants tucked in to a pair of black army boots, much like his Stand.
Character: Off the job, he's a bit of a flirt, and has many admirers, especially in his homeland of Spain. On the job, he is lethal to his target, both as a hunter and assassin, and takes his job very seriously. He hides in the trees and fires on wild game (an animal hunted for sport or food) desired in the country he's in at the moment. As an assassin, he is hired by various organized crime groups to track down and kill a target for money, most of the criminals being completely unaware of his Stand. The only ones who know are criminals who are Stand Users themselves.
Stand Power: To create arms that can potrude from any surface that it touches.
Example: The stand touches a wall, railing, ground, objects, or other stands (does not work on itself), etc and have any number of arms rise out and fullfill whatever task they're summoned for. (Grasping, restraining, holding, pushing, pulling, etc)
Weakness/Limitations: They're just arms after all, someone strong enough can break their grasp. Once the task is complete they go away. A give away they're being summoned is a faint black circle in the area they're appointed.
I will be honest with you. I have never watched one piece past the episode where they fought the clown for the first time and they defeated him by tickling his feet. But I'm glad you enjoy it. ☺️
Well yeah, the early part of the series are just pure comedical non-sense, which then later evolves into an epic clusterfuck of dramatical escapade while still having that same comedical non-sense but with lower amount of it.
My point about your stand is that since Nico Robin's power is interesting, it also makes that i think your stand is interesting too. Summoning hands may look like only a simple and weak power, but it's an OP power if used cleverly like making a whole barricade with nothing but hands for example (Robin does that later in the series).
A manipulative, self aware stand that can project a saint like image of it's previous user once they die. It only works on people who've witnessed the dead body, even a glimpse of a finger. When that happend they are moved to worship the stand in any way.
The Stand is visible to stand users and those who have seen the body of it's previous user.
Power: E Speed: E Range: E Durability: A Presicion: E Potential: B
The way that it works is that the people who have seen the previous stand users dead body are so overcome and moved by the projected memory that they cant stand to see anything happen to it. Outside of the one skill of projecting, The Stand cannot do anything. However, the people who are under the Stands influence will put themselves on the line inorder to protect the Stand and/or it's current user if they bare witness to a potential dangerous circumstance.
I like your stand! And to answer your question I think a lot of people are on their phones than their desktop/laptop so it's easier to just port over stands. Plus this is the only reliable place to get feed back and find more fans of the show.
Musical Reference: Metallica - Master of Puppets (From the album of the same name) The design and skills are also references to the album, (Disposable Heroes is a song from it).
Skill 1: His ability allows him to control people's souls (and bodies) based on their negative emotions, such as anger, sadness, fear, etc. If the target is a stand user, depending on his willpower, Master of Puppets is able to control his stand.
Skill 2; Disposable heroes: Using emotions such as sadness from relatives, or hatred of having been killed (if that is the case), he is able to bring the dead, although not as they used to be ...
Stand limitations:
Master of Puppets can control one person per finger, that is, it can control only 10 people at a time, but its effectiveness decreases, it is more effective 10 fingers in a single person, than using only one finger, it also depends on willpower and From the magnitude of the victim's negative emotion, this stand is also not very physically strong, so it should not be used in close combat.
Desc: This stand can cause target to lose their ability to sleep, which has detrimental effects on organisms that rely on sleep for personal health or psychological ease. Over time effects include various levels of mental deprecation, insanity and potentially death.
The user may activate it's ability on people who's asleep. When Enter Sandman is summoned, it will phase through into the target's dream, and will give the target the worst nightmare they possibly would have until they woke up. After the target were up he'll never be able to sleep again even if they used any method to go back to sleep as by the post-effect of Enter Sandman, until the target died or the stand user is forced to retract their stand.
The stand is also given alot of buff as an act of self-defense measures if the target is concious about their dream and tried to fight back. If the stand is defeated in the target's dream, the stand will return itself to its user.
Form: This stand technically doesn't have any form as people's perception on their worst nightmare may vary, but physically, it mostly take form of "The Sandman" (search it on google for more exposure) with an extra addition of letters that consist of Insomnia, Dream, Nightmare, Sleep, and Wake tattoed to his body.
Condition: Can only be applied to one target, until the target died or if the stand is forced to retract. If the target is somehow unconcious, they may be able to enter the dream world again, but they will still encounter with Enter Sandman as the stand actually didnt go anywhere and will only go if the condition is fulfilled.
Limit: The stand user has a permanent insomnia, with an exchange of having an enhanced endurance and stamina, and any sort of potential development is nullified.
Of course, it was already apart of the information on the description and condition part.
But doing that wouldn't help protect the user at all since Enter Sandman's physical form only exist in the target's dream, and the user already has a buff of enhanced endurance and stamina that was given by the stand, with the exchange of a permanent insomnia and nullified development potential.
Stand Name: I'll Be There (Michael Jackson song reference)
Ability: Stand Mimicry
Description: I'll Be There is a Stand that resides in its user's eye. It's the weakest Stand of all in its base form, but it can be extremely powerful if its ability activates.
Form: IBT resides in the user's eye and copies the abilities and shape of the Stand of any Stand user it makes direct eye contact with (as in they're looking each other in the eye) with, down to every last detail.
Range: The user's line of sight
Limitations: Ability only activates when both the user/stand and the target make direct eye contact with each other. If fighting a very experienced Stand user who knows their Stand very well, it can be problematic, even though IBT sends the information of the copied Stand to the brain, but not any advanced techniques. The effect wears off after ten minutes. The effect is blocked by any solid object, including glass.
Appearance: IBT's true appearance is unknown to everyone, including its user.
Attacks/Abilities
Mimic: If the user and the target (as in the stand's user, not the stand itself) look each other in the eye, IBT replicates the target's Stand, if the target is a Stand User, for ten minutes.
User Profile
User: Akira Tamagashi
Age: 21
Appearance: A 5'6'' man with straight black hair styled to the side. Has one blue eye and one red eye. Lives a very boring life and wishes he could be somebody else with a more interesting life.
Personality: He's just a man who recently moved to Morioh, hoping he could find some spice of life there, as he had recently heard of bizarre events occuring there.
Background: He discovered his Stand at the age of 10 when its ability activated for the first time when he and an old American man in tan clothes and hat looked each other in the eye when he was coming home from a vacation in Egypt. When they were leaving, thorny purple vines started sprouting from his arms. He eventually got them under control, but right when he had, they disappeared. Before that day, his life had been an average one. Average grades, average personality, just the definition of your average schoolboy.
Cool concept, i like it. Though i have a question, is it only the ability that is copied? Or it'll also copy the stand form too? Like if IBT's ability activates, are we also going to be able to summon the stand that is copied? Sorry for this much of a question, because this stand seems very interesting, not gonna lie.
It would copy the form of the copied Stand and would appear in its original form (not affected by Requiem or other form changes, such as Star Platinum) and would be able to use any abilities the copied Stand could use, just slightly weaker. In the case of more powerful attacks such as Time Stop, the duration would be decreased to the amount the user would know. If IBT copied The World, it would be capable of using Time Stop, but only for as long as the user would know at the time. Once again, thank you for the questions!
Nice, and one more question. If the target that was going to be copied is invisible or do not have any exact physical form, like Achtung Baby or my newest stand for example, are they also going to be an exception? Or is there any technique that will make IBT able to copy them?
As long as the user and the target can both see each other and look each other in the eye for it to work. If IBT's user can make out the physical appearance of the target the ability would work. In the case of Achtung Baby, if the user was covered in makeup or some way the user could see or make out the face, the ability could work. As in the case of a stand like Enter Sandman, both IBT's user and Enter Sandman's users would need to make eye contact, not the user and the stand.
Something I didn't mention in the description, it would need to be bare eye contact. If the target is wearing something to cover their eyes, such as glasses (with lenses of course), or was behind a solid object, the ability would not activate.
Stand name: Neon Trees (referencing the band of the same name)
Ability: Chromokinesis (Manipulation of colors)
Description: Neon Trees is a Stand capable of absorbing the color around it , and converting it into energy in its body. When that energy is released, it can deal quite a bit of damage, depending on the amount of energy released and the concentration of it, but cannot damage anybody who is colorblind.
Form: When retracted, it takes the form of the user's shadow. When it's being summoned, it emerges from the user's shadow facing the direction opposite to which the shadow was pointing.
Range: The maximum absorption range is 6 meters around the stand. The stand itself can move within a range a bit shorter than that of Heirophant Green's.
Limitations: Neon Trees can only have a certain amount of energy in it at a time before both it and its user begin to increase their body temperature at an alarming rate, causing a fever or spontaneous combustion. Its color attacks cannot damage anybody who is completely colorblind (only sees in black and white).
Appearance: Neon Trees emerges as a pitch black humanoid figure with neon pink sunglasses (think the ones people would wear indoors) and an afro through which it absorbs and distributes color.
Attacks/Abilities
Spectrum Barrage: A barrage attack where Neon Trees focuses its energy into its hands and feet, and releases them through a rapid barrage of punches and kicks.
Spectrum Finisher: Neon Trees finishes its barrage by focusing its remaining barrage energy into one hand or foot, and punches/kicks the victim, ending its barrage.
Chroma Shot: Neon Trees focuses energy into its hand and releases it as a ball of color, about three quarters the size of Narancia Ghirga's Aerosmith.
Chroma Beam: Similar to Chroma Shot but it's focused as a constant ray released with both hands.
World of Color: Neon Trees absorbs all the energy it can and releases it all at once as a massive ray of light. Meant as a last resort, and is very similar to Bites the Dust.
Blind: Neon Trees focuses a bit of energy into its fingers and pokes the victim's eyes, blinding them once the pain subsides. Also works on other Stands.
Color Manipulation, eh? Cool concept once again. And yet again, i have a question. The thing is about colorblind, is that there is 3 types of them. Red-green, Blue-yellow, and total colorblindness. Will that make any exception? Because being colorblind doesnt mean they cant completely see any color, only a certain amount of it. Unless if they are in the type of total colorblind, of course.
Total colorblindness means total immunity to attacks. Otherwise, it would depend on how much color of the attack they would be able to see. They would take damage equal to the percentage of color they would be able to see. For example, if it's 25% red and no green, the victim would take 75% of the attack and the rest would return to the spot it was taken from. Thank you for the questions!
Desc: The user of this stand can transform their body completely into darkness/shadows. The user can assume a two-dimensional form, extend outward to become a larger shadow, blend into the darkness/shadows completely, or even teleport through them.
Form: It is a suit-type of stand. It has a form of a dark cloak that wraps around the user. Pattern of greek meandros is decorated all over the cloak, giving it a gloom and mystifying design. This cloak however, is a bound-type of stand, meaning that non-stand users can also see it.
Condition: The stand's power ability is activated when the user hides himself inside the cloak in a dark or shadowy place.
Limit: Can only be used on a dark or shadowy place, and if a dark area is being lighted or illuminated, that area is no longer accessible until that area is dark again.
Effects: When Darkness Mimicry activates, the greek meandros pattern on the cloak will radiate a faint dark grey light. He will then drown himself in the dark or any shadowy place and gain complete control and flexibility around it. (Similiar to Black Sabbath, but minus the strength, durability, and speed buff.)
Range : As far as the dark or shadowy place goes.
Stage two of the Stand: Night Prowler Back in Black (yes, another AC/DC reference.)
New Ability: Absolute Darkness
Desc: The user is able to create a field of absolute impenetrable darkness that completely negates sight and may also dull or even completely negate the other senses.
Combined with previous and new ability, if there is no dark or shadowy place surrounding the user to move around, the user can just make a new one and then assert dominance over the enemy inside it.
Condition : Has to shout "Night Prowler Back in Black" in order to activate (just like in the series).
Limit : 3 hours cooldown, and Absolute darkness only lasts for a minute. The maximum range of the field is 100 meters.
Overpowered version of the stand: Night Prowler Requiem
New Ability: Darkness Embodiment
Desc: The stand is now the physical manifestation or personification of Darkness, the all-encompassing void which acts as the counterbalance to light. The darkness manifested is made of pure negativity and lack of illumination. The user of this stand is able to essentially tapping into the core of different forms of darkness itself to assert their dominion.
No more description needed, the user of this stand is simply one with the darkness.
This is just a long-short story about the stand user that i wrote to spend my free time. Feel free to read it, and please leave any suggestion or critic cause that may help me become better in the future.
Stand User : Razor Sedge (yet another AC/DC reference)
Razor Sedge works as a hitman.
At a cold and frightening darkness in the night with a dagger in his pocket, Razor was out to assassinate a fortune teller who is a famous celebrity that recently got his popularity from a TV show. When the perfect time to strike had come, he didnt hesitate to take that chance and ambushes him from behind. He then stabbed the fortune teller with his dagger in the back, and it goes straight to the heart. The poor fortune teller's body fell off to the ground, cold and lifeless.
The moment he thought that he had murdered his target, a hand grabbed his shoulder. Razor flinched and he was completely caught by suprise, mixed with confusion and panic. It was the fortune teller.
The should-have-been-died fortune teller then walks slowly, closing in the to the frightened hitman, and whispered
"You picked the wrong target, my dear friend".
Suddenly, Razor felt a very painful jolt in his stomach, and flew over to a nearby lamppost. A punch to the gut, physically, that comes out of nowhere.
Razor, who was almost knocked out from the sudden attack, quickly regains his balance and tried to attack the fortune teller again, only to no avail and resulted in him being flown again, this time to a wall. This time, the punch was even more powerful it broke Razor's ribs, and the hitman yelled in pain. The knife were also flown off far away.
The fortune teller then walks to the defenseless hitman. He crouches, and said to him,
"I dont want to kill you. I saw in my vision that you're the saviour. We must've been entangled by fate to meet in here. You're a hitman right? How about if i give you an arrow that holds unbelievable powers that goes beyond anyone's imaginations inside it, in exchange of leaving me alone?"
The hitman didnt believe anything about what the fortune teller said, but he would do anything to survive even if it involved some stupid fairytale things, which then he agreed to the deal.
"Very well, and it's nice to see you being a good child obeying his father's words. Here it is my dear, use it to however you like as long as you're doing it for the weak and fight for justice." said the fortune teller as he dropped an arrow like object on the floor.
"Remember, never meet me again, until fate tells me that my vision about you is correct"
The fortune teller then walks away an disappears into the darkness, completely gone in the eye. Razor then gets up and grab the unknown object, analyzing it. Confused by what it is and the origin of it, he would just put it on his pocket and waste no time to go back at his home. After all that trouble, he definitely needed some peaceful rest at home, and calm his mind down.
After a very long walk to his home, he opened the door, and was greeted by a man, currently wielding what had being seen as a knife right in front of him.
Razor, trying to solve the mystery of why there's another hitman in his house, guessed that his employer knew that Razor failed, so he hired another hitman to kill him with the sole reason of cleaning the tracks left behind.
The poor hitman who was just want to have some nice and peaceful rest, quickly lunges in front of him and tried to disarm him. The opposing hitman knew and tried to counter the attack, only to be counter-countered by Razor and the knife then dropped to the ground.
As the opposing hitman were trying to get the knife back, an idea appeared on the hitman's head, as he remembered that he had an arrow-shaped object in his pocket. He then tried to attack the opposing hitman with it, but the enemy saw him and then he kicked him off, making the hitman dropped the arrow and falling to the floor.
The opposing hitman gave up on finding the knife and grabs the arrow. He then tried to stab Razor in the chest. Razor tried to stop it, but he lacked the strength due to the previous event, and the arrow ended up stabbing him.
Seemingly successful on killing the target, the opposing hitman then waste no time to clean off the evidences, and quickly left the location.
Little did the opposing hitman know, that the arrow didnt exactly kill his target. Instead, it chooses him as a stand user.
When Razor woke up, he was greeted by dark cloak in his body. Confused, he tried to take it off, but it still stuck. He tried punching it, but it gives no effect and instead he gets hurt. When he completely covered himself using the cloak, he felt that the cloak was radiating, and then he suddenly drowns into the floor. It felt like he's invisible and intangible, and he moved freely all over the house.
When he flicked the light switch, suddenly he lost control of the power and fell to the ground. It was at this moment that he remembered what the fortune teller told him.
"Am i a saviour? Can i save people? But i'm just a hitman, how am i supposed to save people if the only thing i can do is murder?"
The thought crossed his mind, and he remembered that his main reason of being a hitman is because he was sick of those rich bastards who abuses money and slaves the weak, while getting away with it by corrupting the system. That thought then fades away when he instead started working for them, almost changed his main reason of being a hitman.
It was at this night, that marked the start of the anti-hero, who hides in the shadow and kills them who abuses the weak for their own gain. He who lives in the darkness, raising justice behind the scenes.
Razor hoped that one day he meets that fortune teller again, to thank him for returning his main purpose of being a hitman, and may even have a rematch again each other. He also hoped that he may find that employer who hired a hitman against him, and seek revenge.
(For some reason the game didn't work on my browser, so i apologize for the lack of any visual representation. Any suggestion or critic will be very helpful.)
Stand Name: Fade to Black (Metallica reference)
Ability: Event Negation
Desc: The user of this stand can take any event that has happened and revert it back to the state that it was previously in, as if the event never happened, thus effectively undoing any changes that occurred in said event. This could range from something as simple as regenerating an arm that has already been severed and incinerated and the wound already sealed off, to rejecting death itself for resurrection (similiar to GER, but without the loop).
Form: Its a humanoid that wears nothing but a black robe that covers around all the body excluding the head. It skin is a pure white (like literally white) that is covered with a black tattoo of the negation symbol (¬). On its head, it wears an executioner mask made out of newspaper filled with the same symbol that covers its skin, which almost make it looks like a black mask. Its arms and legs are made out of newspapers that are also filled with the same black symbols.
Usage: Event Negation is activated when the stand comes in contact with the affected event, area, or object (mostly by punching). The user can also control when will the stand's fist activate the ability, meaning that he can punch-barrage someone without any side effects.
Effects: When activating its ability, the symbol that covered the stand's body will also appear on the affected contact. The symbol then fades away upon post-activation. A reverse low-pitched sound of [REDACTED] will also be playing when the ability is activated.
Condition: May need to be activated voluntarily, so if the user is disabled, it cannot work or stopped working.
Limit: Can only be used on the present timeline. Events that happened in the past (already happened) or the future (not happening yet) wouldn't be able to be changed.
Well yes, but technically no, since King Crimson's power is to skip time and erase the skipped time, and can be activated freely. While King Nothing (changed to Fade To Black due to some reasons) needs to touch something in order for its power to activate.
So it would be a mixture of Echoes and Return to Zero, with being able to make contact with something and make noise (though it's only one thing), with the ability similar to RTZ, where recent events are reverted?
Oh shit so you replied to this broken stand that i made, and it was 2 weeks ago? Welp sry for not checking the notifications, but yep, the contact is the same concept as Echoes and it's ability is the same as Requiem without the loops.
A close range stand has a same punching power as star platinum and it look crazy diamond but the pads are triangle instead of box shape. It has slow precision but it has ability to slow down time.
Ability: slow down time only for 10 seconds. And the stand user aka jack pagas can only see in slow down time
(here i am again to show off another Stand i made, wooh!)
➟ Stand User: 「Frullata C. Zeppeli」
➟ History: Born in 1990 (17 by 2007), Frullata is the Great Granddaughter of one of Caesar A. Zeppeli's brothers. She had heard stories of her ancestors but never knew about what happened to William and Caesar Zeppeli or the Joestars.
In 1995, at the age of 5, her family's house caught fire with her miraculously being to only survivor. Soon after, she slowly began developing a Stand, most likely as "defense-mechanism" her inner spirit caused. During her time in an Orphanage, she would often not be seen for hours in the afternoon as she would sneak out and explore the town she was in,. As she got older and more recognized by the people of the town, she was given part time jobs at a few of the stores and was eventually adopted by an old couple who owned a small soup shop and started going to school.
At the age of 15, in 2005, Frullata felt compelled to go to her abandoned, burnt down house from her childhood. Whether this was out of curiosity, or a sign of her fate is uncertain, but she eventually found a relic of her ancestry: an old, damaged newspaper of Caesar Zeppeli during his time in a gang.
Piquing her curiosity for her old lineage, Frullata is now set out to investigate anybody who may have ties to the Zeppeli name to find out more about where she came from. As of 2007, she's currently interested in a Japanese Marine Biologist who's family may have come into contact with hers...
➟ Stand Name: 「Nothing Special」
➟ Stand Ability: Nothing Special has the ability to manipulate the movement of any liquid that it or Frullata come into contact with. Its most notable use of Nothing Special's ability is stopping a liquid in mid-air to create a small barrier that can slow down any projectiles coming towards her. This ability cannot change the state of the liquid and is only exclusive to the liquid state of an object.
Stand user: Jin Joestar (like no joke this is my real name lol)
Stand name: Stars and Stripes
Ability: can teleport objects or people to him or go to people or places if he has a photo of the person, object, or place. He need not to look at the photo just be in possession of the photo.
Stand Power : A Automatic Colony Stand That Latches onto somebody and starts taking blood to heal the user, however this is not by the users will and the user has no will to live.
The reason the potential is infinity is Act 5's power is Power Mimicry but the potential will be become E when i have finished over heaven version of Quinquennium.
This stand, named for one of Stevie Wonder's greatest songs, takes the appearance of a tall (almost 9 1/2 feet) figure in dark armor and a white turban who wields a long (about 4 feet) sword in each hand. Born from its user's dissatisfaction with his shortcomings and subsequent developing of his god complex, it is a terrifying stand in close quarters. Due to its ability to wield its swords with uncanny precision and coupled with its user's high intelligence and logically calculating way of thinking, it is not to be underestimated.
Galloway is a strange remote controlled stand that wears a plague mask and dawns a long black coat. When a stand user is within 50m of Galloway their stand slowly loses power until it completely disappears. Galloway is in no way aggressive and activates it's sub-stand when successfully removing someone's stand.
Sub-Stand: FWB only activates when a targets stand is completely removed. FWB is a small stand that stands at 3 foot that resembles a ninja in all black. FWB is very fast and wields a katana to quickly and decisively finish the target. Before activation FWB hides inside Galloways Jacket.
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Stand Name: Smooth Criminal
Stand user: Raziel Bloom
Stand Stats:
Smooth Criminal is a God-like Stand similar to The World, that can tell if someone is lying, stop time for 30 seconds when at max focus, and freeze a person in place for 5 seconds at most. It's Range is a mile, and his strength is about as good as Crazy Diamond. He can almost travel at the speed of sound. His Accuracy is not terrible, but bad. Smooth Criminal's appearance looks human-like. Like how Star Platinum appears. And, his cry is: "Zorarararararara!".
BIT Ova powered not gonna lie....
30-second time stop (even it's it the very maximum) and 1 mile range. If this were a Requiem that would make sense, but I see no detail stating it's a Requiem/evolved Stand. and a B in range is a lot less than a mile.
Also, The World, by the end of part 3, has a 10-second time stop and the same speed as Star Platinum, which (I think) is slower than the speed of sound.
"Smooth Criminal is a God-like Stand"
KODEGA... REKUIEM... DA
Stand name: Unity
Stand user: Joshua Davis
Stand stats:
Unity is a stand that manifests in the form of a long wooden pole with carvings on it that show the pole touching 2 people and them fusing into one. When unity touches 2 objects (living or not) they will fuse together. Unity can be seen by anyone, and to non-stand users, unity is as hard as a normal wooden pole, and if it is broken it will regenerate in 5 minutes. To stand users unity is as hard as diamond and if broken by a stand user it takes 15 minutes to regenerate. Unity can extend the length of the pole it manifests as, and it can extend as far as needed to reach the target, even if its across the earth. Unity can extend at a rate of 60 miles per hour.
Ability #1: Human Fusion
Unity fuses 2 people together, creating the JoJo of part 8.
Ability #2: Human Object Fusion
Just creates Angelo but with different objects.
Ability #3: Human Animal Fusion
Unity fuses a human and an animal, having a 50/50 effect of the animal getting the human's brain or the human getting the animal's brain.
Ability #4: Object Fusion
Unity fuses an object together, creating an object with good parts of each object. (EX. Rocket launcher + Pistol, creates a pistol with exploding bullets)
Ability #5: Kamikaze
Unity fuses the earth and the moon together, destroying both in the process.
dang! that sounds cool!
Thanks Sam! Also, thanks for responding to other people. You don't know how far some positive feedback can go for some people.
You're welcome! Im usually a pretty nice person.
Black Day: Power Unconceded
BEFORE YOU READ THIS I HIGLY SUGGEST CHECKING OUT THE MAIN STAND AND ORIGINAL REQUIEM VERSION! (https://itch.io/post/1404026)
Now assumingly you read the my original idea and requiem original of Black Day, I can tell you that Black Day: Shackles Of Death is precisely what would be considered the main story if it was in a manga. Although I thought since Black Day would originally be for a villain I decided I wanted to go back and make a Requiem version for if a hero possesed Black Day. This is what I came up with,
Black Day: Power Unconceded
Power: A
Speed: D
Range: C
Durability: (See ability "Imprison Harvest")
Precision: C
Potential: A
Black Day: Power Unconceded is broken down in a bit of an example;
When Black Day's user (hero version of course) was pierced with the requiem arrow their mind grew blank and all of their chains faded away, they become unconcious. In their mind they begin to hear a rattle of chains slowly repeating them selfves getting louder until just loud enough for you to make out a few sounds. The rattling will stop and you will see chains slowly wrapping around this unconcious visionary person which of course is the user. Then one last time in a perfectly audible version the rattling of the chains will pronounce "You are determined to for fill for your goal, you are unconceded. This goal is.." the user will in-voluntarily state what they wanted to most to happen before they pierced themself with the Requiem arrow. They will gain concious and their body will rapidly thrash chains way bigger and more poweful then before and incase themselves with an almost 7 meter tall titan of chains with a few two new abilities.
Imprison Harvest: This move passively activates whenever the chain titan takes a serious blow, the chains will rap around whatever hit them and disable its abilities, therefore is star platinum were to use a hard hitting ora punch Black Day: Power Unconceded would rap chains around star platinums arm and then Jotaro would temporally not be able to use his stand and since stands are physically embodiements of the souls fighting spirit, Jotaro would loose all motive to fight and would begin to cower in fear unless another stand overwrites Imprison Harvest and brings his stand back and motive to fight. Last but not least when Imprison Harvest takes place it immediately breaks down the strenght of what hit the user and incorparates in as is own therefore now it could form a solid punch with power of star platinum's on top of its own.
Power Unconceded: Now to explain how this ability works it would be better if you knew what the name meant. Conceded means that you have utterly accepted defeat and lost all hope so when you add the root "un" it means you arent conceded and by using power as an adjective you have the meaning of a power that cannot be defeated or forced to defeat. This ability is simple as Chariot Requiems soul swap move, you just cant beat Black Day: Power Unconceded unless you have a stand much like GER that can change the destiny or future much like how Diavolo saw he was going to win against Giorno but GER changed that fate.
Universal Chains: This is the last new ability you gain is that youre chains no longer abide by the rules of this universe; now this is where you can get creative. This passive ability simply doesnt care about matter going through other matter or color or light or anything. The reason this is so powerful is because you can do anything with your chains aka something that I find interesting would be making a chain so small that is could split an atom and now last time I checked when you split atoms it creative a sort of explosion or something I dont remember but thats just surface level things as in you can now make portals and black holes and all sorts of wacky things.
Now incase I didnt mention the user cannot control themselves while using Black Day: Power Unconceded so their chains act upon what goal they set in the beginning and wont stop until the goal is done or the user is killed. So you best bet if you hear the booming of something huge coming and the rattling of thousands of chains you best stay out of whatevers coming because if you dont, you're last hour strikes.
Holy shit, its too OP, and that's incredible lmao
Like I said it was never meant to be made but I figured Id make it for fun considering it was in the back of my head for a while lol
here is the description on what happens when you split an atom What happens when you split an atom? ... The energy released in splitting just one atom is minuscule. However, when the nucleus is split under the right conditions, some stray neutrons are also released and these can then go on to split more atoms, releasing more energy and more neutrons, causing a chain reaction.
and it also depends on how many atoms its splitting and with enough it could probably make a nuke.
My 4th stand will be based off this idk a kid person's idea, and i will put desc and form in the same paragraph to save time because shit i have school after this.
(Stand stats is at the very bottom)
Stand Name: Burn Monkey
Ability: Eh, its about heat but it's not completely focusing about only one heat ability, so...
Desc: Burn Monkey is a stand that is based of Sun Wukong from the Chinese Mythology. It has it's own original and distinguishable features such as his fiery spikey hair and his cape and scarf that is made out of pure fire. It can control heat using it's staff. When Burn Monkey is activating it's power, the staff will glow red and the edges of the staff will burst out flames. This stand is also faster due to enhanced kinetic movement thanks to its heat.
Range: 5 meters, it's a CQC stand.
Condition: Can absorb heat from various media and applications, such as a newly-made asphalt road, boiling water, sunrays, or even from a direct physical attack aswell (based on the vector theory that every kinetic movement creates heat), which minimizes the damage and boosting it's durability.
Limitation: Taking heat for too long will make the stand overheats itself and burn, and you know what happens to the user if the stand is drowned in flames. Cold temperatures and environment could also nerfed this stand's prowess.
Skills:
Kinetic Boost (Passive skill)
Burn Monkey's speed and precision is boosted due to its kinetic movement being enhanced thanks to its heat.
Heat Absorption (Basic utility skill)
Burn Monkey would take heat from any variety of media and applications, just like what's explained in the condition section.
Hot Rod (Basic offensive skill)
Burn Monkey would channel the absorbed heat to its staff, which then glows red. The staff would be so hot that if it came in contact with a material, that targeted material would be burned or melted in just a few seconds. If it's heated really hot enough, the edges of the staff will burst out flames.
A classic barrage with a finisher is a part of this skill.
Heat Absorption Aegis (Basic defensive skill)
The damage from a direct physical attack can be minimized by absorbing the heat, based on the vector theory that implies that any kinetic movement produces heat.
Fatamorgana (Special utility skill)
To prevent overheat from absorbing the heat around, Burn Monkey could spread out the heat that had been absorbed, making the temperature of the area significantly but slowly being increased. If an area is too hot, an optical mirage illusion would happen and make people in the surrounding area halucinates doppelgangers of Burn Monkey. If all of the people in the area halucinates the same illusion, the doppelganger would take physical form and became real.
In short, this skill produce clones. Burn Monkey can also replace its position with its clone, which makes teleportation possible.
Spit Fire (Special offensive skill)
Burn Monkey would flow out all out its heat out of its mouth, making the stand spits fire (literally) and burns everything on sight. For an easier exposure, imagine a dragon breathing out flames out of its mouth.
This skill needs alot of heat, like 95% of all the heat it had. If Burn Monkey were to start this skill by absorbing from 0%, it would be very risky and dangerous because it's close to the point of overheating.
Fatamorgana Aegis (Special defensive skill)
Remember when i said that the illusion of Burn Monkey can take physical form and be real? Well that clone could also absorb heat too. Burn Monkey and its clones would take in a group stance, both absorbing and gushing out all of its heat at the same time, which created a chemical reaction between the overlapsing heat and the air.
The result would be a whole energy barrier made out of overheated aura that will burn and melt anything that comes towards it, protecting anyone inside the barrier.
Welp damn, i made an OP stand, but well, this idea is based off the fusion of RHCP and Speed King, so... thats that.
This is kinda the story continuation of that Razor Sedge guy person, the user of the previous stand i made, so if you read this out of context it may be a little bit off so i suggest you read my previous stand user's story first before reading this one.
Stand User: Ardente A. Zeppeli
Age : 18
Arden is Third-year high school delinquent who looks like a fashion designer that recently joined a yakuza clan. His blonde hair fades into red and styled to look like an emo mohawk hair. He fashions a red leather jacket on top of a student uniform with two scarfs whose color is orange and white covering each other on its neck. He also wear Yeezys. His skin is pale white, and its looks pretty clear on his face because he wears a very dark eyeliners and purple lipstick.
Arden's mother owns a salon and he always helps her to ease her job everyday. His mom wasnt the only person he helped, said the whole neighbourhood. His personality is the last thing people would guess when seeing his rather intimidating looks. Although he may have a good reputation, his school life said otherwise. Well you know the glimpse, about how looks is a major trigger of being shunned in the said "education" place.
Tired of being discriminated, he started to skip school on purpose, giving him a delinquent title. He did so because he thought that the time on school is just not worth it and prefer having more time to help around the neighbourhood. Whatever the school thinks his motive on skipping school are, it's definitely not positive.
When he returned to school, no one wants to interact with him, none at all, and showed it obviously. At first, it wasnt really that obvious, people would still talk to him, while being very frightened. But now, it just really shows that people shunned him, and even starts to spread false gossips and rumors about our poor delinquent boy.
His school life wasnt his first depression flag. His father was the latest succesor of the Zeppeli family ; he resembles as gyro's son, though which he claims, unknown if it's the truth or just a blantant lie to get a financial support from the Speedwagon Foundation. His son is the only who believes his lies, due to him being a very great role model to Arden. After saying that he's going to the store to buy milk, he was never seen again. Even though Arden believed that he'll come back, his anxiety made him always thought about the possibility that he may be died, or even left the family.
When he tried to pull out the game over screen of his life, there he meets someone, the one that'll change his whole life. That someone looks like he's wearing a dark gray meander-patterned cloak, and that someone also looks like he's trapped on the ground. No, not trapped, but rather goes through the ground. And that weird person, also seems to kill an old man, that old man who always sells ice cream to the kids. Seeing someone he knew being murdered right in front of him, his anger ignored all of his depression, and sets his whole vision to the mysterious man.
Rushing to the cloaked man, he raises his fist and launch it to punch the man. But before even reaching to it, the mysterious person drowns himself into the shadow and tripped the enraged delinquent. He tried to get some balance after falling off, but then suddenly a painful jolt resonates from his chest. He had been stabbed, with an arrow-looking thing.
Before that mysterious man left, Arden heard some of his words.
"That fortune teller is really crazy. Telling me to stab anyone who saw the murder with the stand arrow, i wonder what the fuck is in his mind. Justice my ass, 'never meet me again' my ass. If you really wanted to meet me that bad, why just not come to me and not suddenly calling me on a video call, fucking old zoomer."
Confused, and in pain, Arden can't do anything but lying in the ground, dying, and hyperventilating. Slowly, his vision fades into black. He thought that this is his end.
Little did he know that he would be the JoBro who accompanies that mysterious cloaked man to destroy the yakuza clan, and actually succeeded, while having a brokenly OP stand. Epic.
Also if your wondering why don't I write it well I have the desc and stats or whatever you wanna call it but anyway I wanna see what other people do with these names/stands
ok so I have two for if people want to write a desc for these I have Burn monkey and I have end of ZA line use those if ya wsnt
I'll take an order of one Burn Monkey with an extra of End of The Line, please thank you very much.
Ooh, I've got a good one, I would say.
Stand Name: Right Round Act 1 (An Act Stand like Echoes and Tusk) (References a song I hope you know)
Ability: Spin Distribution
Description: Right Round Act 1 is a spherical Stand about 1.5 times the size of a steel ball. It's capable of imbuing any small object that it touches with Spin energy.
Appearance: A green, spherical Stand with light green accents around its sides, top, and bottom that look like Gyro Zeppeli's facial hair. Its face consists of two pink, long, oval-shaped eyes on the front and back.
Range: 12 Meters (It's much weaker in this state)
Limitations: It's generally very small and weak, and when it comes to direct combat, it's a little stronger than a steel ball with minimal amounts of Spin. Its main use lies in its ability, able to imbue small objects (as in no bigger than a small beach ball, which is a little bigger than RRA1) with a bit of Spin energy.
Attacks
Spin Induction: RRA1 touches an object with its spherical body, imbuing it with a relatively small amount of Spin.
User: Girevole "Jerry" Pallone
Occupation: Upper Secondary School Second-Year
Appearance: Has blonde hair and light green eyes. Wears a black school uniform with a light green tie with dark green polka-dots and black dress shoes. Casually, he wears a white tank top with a dark brown puffer jacket and khakis.
Character: At this point, he's just an Upper Secondary Student born in Naples, Italy, who just discovered his Spin capabilities, as well as his Stand. What he doesn't know is that when he was young, his parents knew that they would be found and killed by a certain individual who wanted to eradicate the last of the Zeppeli family. Before Jerry's parents were killed, they brought Jerry to an old family friend of theirs who lived in Rome, and gave Jerry to them.
Shortly afterward, Jerry's parents were murdered, and the Girevole Family adopted him. They knew his lineage, but never told him in fear of what would happen. Once, he was bouncing a ball against the wall while in detention (he was never the greatest student), and began focusing on it. Spin energy began to course through his arm into the ball, and as he threw it, it went as fast as a bullet and left a dent in the wall. At that moment, his Stand, Right Round, manifested before his eyes.
Jerry is the Great-Great-Great-Grandson of one of Gyro Zeppeli's siblings (not sure if he had siblings but I would assume so), and the last user of Spin.
Later Acts to come, as well as character development.
Stand Name: Dream On (referencing the Aerosmith song of the same name aka the best song to ever exist)
Type: Long Range/Utility Stand
Ability: Materialization & Pocket Dimension
Appearance: Has the figure of a genie, human from the waist up and the legs are a white fluffy cloud. Top half is a sky blue and there are smaller white clouds around the wrists and on the shoulders. It's wearing white goggles completely covering its eyes. Its hair is white like its goggles, and it's long and flows about as if it were blowing in the wind.
Description: A genie-like Stand that can take both it and its user into a pocket dimension, and can use it for various purposes. It's able to enter others' dreams via the pocket dimension and utilize it.
Range: 5 meters (without taking into account the pocket dimension
Limitations: Items can be imagined in the dimension, but only if the user knows the physics behind the item (same condition as Momo Yaoyorozu's Quirk in My Hero Academia). If DO and its user are in another's dream, the target can imagine things to gain the upper hand, and DO is significantly weaker.
Attacks (most of these will reference lyrics from the song)
Barrage - Your average barrage, just weaker than average. Has a finisher.
Maybe Tomorrow - Dream On's cloud takes it, its user, and sometimes an item in or out a pocket dimension.
Imagine Object - While in the pocket dimension, the user can imagine an object from inside, as long as they know the science of said object. Only works with objects that exist. Larger items take longer to create. Can throw objects out of the dimension via the cloud beneath DO's torso, but needs to exit the dimension with the object.
Look in the Mirror - In the dimension, the user makes a reflection which turns into a clone of the user, and exits the dimension with the user. The clone acts off of what the user is thinking and cannot use a Stand in exchange for slightly heightened physical capability.
Dream Until Your Dreams Come True - The user takes a spear and exits the dimension with it. DO's clouds separate from its body and surround the target, then DO throws the spear, with enough force to go straight through the victim, into a cloud, causing the spear to go through another cloud, then another, and another, dealing heavy, if not lethal, damage.
(This kinda feels a little OP, but I feel the draw backs are significant enough to make it a bit weaker, but still on the stronger side)
User: Jens Molnig
Occupation: IKEA Employee
Appearance: Brown, curly hair with brown eyes. Wears an unzipped dark blue jacket and a black shirt underneath with jeans and white shoes.
Character: A 21 year-old Swedish man who lives a secluded lifestyle in the suburbs of Backa, Sweden. Talented with a guitar, though prefers not to show it. When he goes, he tries to fit in with a crowd. He spaces out at times, but he has a wild imagination. Often researches physics and the chemical makeup of the world around him.
NOTE: No, I'm not European.
NOTE 2: No, I'm not gay, either.
I am neither gay nor European.
Damn, nice art! And also, cannibal stand? That's quite rare...
Yeah, Since IC3PEAK is a Wendigo-like stand, i figured it might work.. Could be lethal in the wrong hands tho... But in my hands, its f r e e r e a l e s t a t e
had to do it
You have officially triggered IC3PEAK.
Look at what you've done. The Enemy stand users are here....
wow
Stand Name: Guns 'N' Roses (referencing the rock band of the same name)
Type: Mixed Range
Ability: Human Arsenal (not sure how to put that)
Appearance: A robotic humanoid figure with a skull for a head. Dressed in a black trench coat with black gloves, pants, and boots with an all-black flamenco hat (minus the tassles hanging down) and a rose in its mouth.
Description: A humanoid Stand capable of transforming it or its user's limbs or torso into various firearms.
Range: 2 meters away from user, in exchange for added range from the firearms
Limitations: Only two limbs can be transformed at a time, with limited ammo that can be replenished both manually and automatically.
Attacks
Firearm Transformation: The Stand's or User's limb (hand, forearm, whole arm or foot, lower leg, full leg) spins briefly and transforms into a firearm the user is familiar with. It has to be the same size as the weapon, meaning it has to be as long as part of an arm or leg.
Bullet Barrage: The user/Stand transforms both arms into assault rifles and empties their magazines (think Aerosmith's Vola Barrage)
Bullet Punch: GNR performs a rapid flurry of punches, each punch having the same speed and force as a bullet. Your standard Stand barrage with a finisher.
Cannonfire: A cannon erects from the user/Stand's chest and fires a cannonball. Is very lethal if not dodged.
Pistol Kick: The user/Stand's foot transforms into a pistol and kicks the opponent then fires once to a few times.
NOTE: The Stand's firearms have unlimited ammo and the Stand itself is faster, making it a better option in a more organized fight against another Stand User.
User: Carlo Tirador
Occupation: Professional hunter, secretly an assassin.
Appearance: A famed Spanish hunter often found in forests and jungles across Europe. Has brown hair and green eyes, about 5'8'', and wears a black trench coat with several pockets, black pants tucked in to a pair of black army boots, much like his Stand.
Character: Off the job, he's a bit of a flirt, and has many admirers, especially in his homeland of Spain. On the job, he is lethal to his target, both as a hunter and assassin, and takes his job very seriously. He hides in the trees and fires on wild game (an animal hunted for sport or food) desired in the country he's in at the moment. As an assassin, he is hired by various organized crime groups to track down and kill a target for money, most of the criminals being completely unaware of his Stand. The only ones who know are criminals who are Stand Users themselves.
Stand Name: Hands Off
Stand Type: Humanoid
Stand Power: To create arms that can potrude from any surface that it touches.
Example: The stand touches a wall, railing, ground, objects, or other stands (does not work on itself), etc and have any number of arms rise out and fullfill whatever task they're summoned for. (Grasping, restraining, holding, pushing, pulling, etc)
Weakness/Limitations: They're just arms after all, someone strong enough can break their grasp. Once the task is complete they go away. A give away they're being summoned is a faint black circle in the area they're appointed.
Power: B
Speed: C
Range: C
Durability: D
Precision: A
Potential: E
I'm getting Nico Robin from One Piece vibes from this stand, not that i complain though
I will be honest with you. I have never watched one piece past the episode where they fought the clown for the first time and they defeated him by tickling his feet. But I'm glad you enjoy it. ☺️
Well yeah, the early part of the series are just pure comedical non-sense, which then later evolves into an epic clusterfuck of dramatical escapade while still having that same comedical non-sense but with lower amount of it.
My point about your stand is that since Nico Robin's power is interesting, it also makes that i think your stand is interesting too. Summoning hands may look like only a simple and weak power, but it's an OP power if used cleverly like making a whole barricade with nothing but hands for example (Robin does that later in the series).
I'll have to watch the show, after I've caught up on JoJo's. 😊
Oh, we're posting our generator results!
Stand Name: Zero to Hero
A manipulative, self aware stand that can project a saint like image of it's previous user once they die. It only works on people who've witnessed the dead body, even a glimpse of a finger. When that happend they are moved to worship the stand in any way.
The Stand is visible to stand users and those who have seen the body of it's previous user.
Power: E
Speed: E
Range: E
Durability: A
Presicion: E
Potential: B
The way that it works is that the people who have seen the previous stand users dead body are so overcome and moved by the projected memory that they cant stand to see anything happen to it. Outside of the one skill of projecting, The Stand cannot do anything. However, the people who are under the Stands influence will put themselves on the line inorder to protect the Stand and/or it's current user if they bare witness to a potential dangerous circumstance.
I like your stand! And to answer your question I think a lot of people are on their phones than their desktop/laptop so it's easier to just port over stands. Plus this is the only reliable place to get feed back and find more fans of the show.
Stand Master:
Alan Heredia
Stand name:
Master of Puppets
Musical Reference:
Metallica - Master of Puppets (From the album of the same name)
The design and skills are also references to the album, (Disposable Heroes is a song from it).
Skill 1:
His ability allows him to control people's souls (and bodies) based on their negative emotions, such as anger, sadness, fear, etc.
If the target is a stand user, depending on his willpower, Master of Puppets is able to control his stand.
Skill 2; Disposable heroes:
Using emotions such as sadness from relatives, or hatred of having been killed (if that is the case), he is able to bring the dead, although not as they used to be ...
Stand limitations:
Master of Puppets can control one person per finger, that is, it can control only 10 people at a time, but its effectiveness decreases, it is more effective 10 fingers in a single person, than using only one finger, it also depends on willpower and From the magnitude of the victim's negative emotion, this stand is also not very physically strong, so it should not be used in close combat.
Stand Name: Enter Sandman (Metallica reference)
Ability: Insomnia Inducement
Desc: This stand can cause target to lose their ability to sleep, which has detrimental effects on organisms that rely on sleep for personal health or psychological ease. Over time effects include various levels of mental deprecation, insanity and potentially death.
The user may activate it's ability on people who's asleep. When Enter Sandman is summoned, it will phase through into the target's dream, and will give the target the worst nightmare they possibly would have until they woke up. After the target were up he'll never be able to sleep again even if they used any method to go back to sleep as by the post-effect of Enter Sandman, until the target died or the stand user is forced to retract their stand.
The stand is also given alot of buff as an act of self-defense measures if the target is concious about their dream and tried to fight back. If the stand is defeated in the target's dream, the stand will return itself to its user.
Form: This stand technically doesn't have any form as people's perception on their worst nightmare may vary, but physically, it mostly take form of "The Sandman" (search it on google for more exposure) with an extra addition of letters that consist of Insomnia, Dream, Nightmare, Sleep, and Wake tattoed to his body.
Condition: Can only be applied to one target, until the target died or if the stand is forced to retract. If the target is somehow unconcious, they may be able to enter the dream world again, but they will still encounter with Enter Sandman as the stand actually didnt go anywhere and will only go if the condition is fulfilled.
Limit: The stand user has a permanent insomnia, with an exchange of having an enhanced endurance and stamina, and any sort of potential development is nullified.
Insomnia inducement, I like it! Just for clarification, though, would the effect end if the stand was manually retracted?
Of course, it was already apart of the information on the description and condition part.
But doing that wouldn't help protect the user at all since Enter Sandman's physical form only exist in the target's dream, and the user already has a buff of enhanced endurance and stamina that was given by the stand, with the exchange of a permanent insomnia and nullified development potential.
Another Stando for today!
Stand Name: I'll Be There (Michael Jackson song reference)
Ability: Stand Mimicry
Description: I'll Be There is a Stand that resides in its user's eye. It's the weakest Stand of all in its base form, but it can be extremely powerful if its ability activates.
Form: IBT resides in the user's eye and copies the abilities and shape of the Stand of any Stand user it makes direct eye contact with (as in they're looking each other in the eye) with, down to every last detail.
Range: The user's line of sight
Limitations: Ability only activates when both the user/stand and the target make direct eye contact with each other. If fighting a very experienced Stand user who knows their Stand very well, it can be problematic, even though IBT sends the information of the copied Stand to the brain, but not any advanced techniques. The effect wears off after ten minutes. The effect is blocked by any solid object, including glass.
Appearance: IBT's true appearance is unknown to everyone, including its user.
Attacks/Abilities
Mimic: If the user and the target (as in the stand's user, not the stand itself) look each other in the eye, IBT replicates the target's Stand, if the target is a Stand User, for ten minutes.
User Profile
User: Akira Tamagashi
Age: 21
Appearance: A 5'6'' man with straight black hair styled to the side. Has one blue eye and one red eye. Lives a very boring life and wishes he could be somebody else with a more interesting life.
Personality: He's just a man who recently moved to Morioh, hoping he could find some spice of life there, as he had recently heard of bizarre events occuring there.
Background: He discovered his Stand at the age of 10 when its ability activated for the first time when he and an old American man in tan clothes and hat looked each other in the eye when he was coming home from a vacation in Egypt. When they were leaving, thorny purple vines started sprouting from his arms. He eventually got them under control, but right when he had, they disappeared. Before that day, his life had been an average one. Average grades, average personality, just the definition of your average schoolboy.
Any thoughts?
CRAAAAAAAAP FORGOT ABOUT ILLUSO
name change time
Cool concept, i like it. Though i have a question, is it only the ability that is copied? Or it'll also copy the stand form too? Like if IBT's ability activates, are we also going to be able to summon the stand that is copied? Sorry for this much of a question, because this stand seems very interesting, not gonna lie.
It would copy the form of the copied Stand and would appear in its original form (not affected by Requiem or other form changes, such as Star Platinum) and would be able to use any abilities the copied Stand could use, just slightly weaker. In the case of more powerful attacks such as Time Stop, the duration would be decreased to the amount the user would know. If IBT copied The World, it would be capable of using Time Stop, but only for as long as the user would know at the time. Once again, thank you for the questions!
Nice, and one more question. If the target that was going to be copied is invisible or do not have any exact physical form, like Achtung Baby or my newest stand for example, are they also going to be an exception? Or is there any technique that will make IBT able to copy them?
As long as the user and the target can both see each other and look each other in the eye for it to work. If IBT's user can make out the physical appearance of the target the ability would work. In the case of Achtung Baby, if the user was covered in makeup or some way the user could see or make out the face, the ability could work. As in the case of a stand like Enter Sandman, both IBT's user and Enter Sandman's users would need to make eye contact, not the user and the stand.
Something I didn't mention in the description, it would need to be bare eye contact. If the target is wearing something to cover their eyes, such as glasses (with lenses of course), or was behind a solid object, the ability would not activate.
my turn now
Stand name: Neon Trees (referencing the band of the same name)
Ability: Chromokinesis (Manipulation of colors)
Description: Neon Trees is a Stand capable of absorbing the color around it , and converting it into energy in its body. When that energy is released, it can deal quite a bit of damage, depending on the amount of energy released and the concentration of it, but cannot damage anybody who is colorblind.
Form: When retracted, it takes the form of the user's shadow. When it's being summoned, it emerges from the user's shadow facing the direction opposite to which the shadow was pointing.
Range: The maximum absorption range is 6 meters around the stand. The stand itself can move within a range a bit shorter than that of Heirophant Green's.
Limitations: Neon Trees can only have a certain amount of energy in it at a time before both it and its user begin to increase their body temperature at an alarming rate, causing a fever or spontaneous combustion. Its color attacks cannot damage anybody who is completely colorblind (only sees in black and white).
Appearance: Neon Trees emerges as a pitch black humanoid figure with neon pink sunglasses (think the ones people would wear indoors) and an afro through which it absorbs and distributes color.
Attacks/Abilities
Spectrum Barrage: A barrage attack where Neon Trees focuses its energy into its hands and feet, and releases them through a rapid barrage of punches and kicks.
Spectrum Finisher: Neon Trees finishes its barrage by focusing its remaining barrage energy into one hand or foot, and punches/kicks the victim, ending its barrage.
Chroma Shot: Neon Trees focuses energy into its hand and releases it as a ball of color, about three quarters the size of Narancia Ghirga's Aerosmith.
Chroma Beam: Similar to Chroma Shot but it's focused as a constant ray released with both hands.
World of Color: Neon Trees absorbs all the energy it can and releases it all at once as a massive ray of light. Meant as a last resort, and is very similar to Bites the Dust.
Blind: Neon Trees focuses a bit of energy into its fingers and pokes the victim's eyes, blinding them once the pain subsides. Also works on other Stands.
What do you think?
It's a bit tempting to change the name of the user but it's still a work in progress...
Color Manipulation, eh? Cool concept once again. And yet again, i have a question. The thing is about colorblind, is that there is 3 types of them. Red-green, Blue-yellow, and total colorblindness. Will that make any exception? Because being colorblind doesnt mean they cant completely see any color, only a certain amount of it. Unless if they are in the type of total colorblind, of course.
Oh, and about the effect, if the ability activates, what happened to the area that the color is stolen on? Will it turn to be a grayscale?
It will turn into a grayscale until the energy is released and hits something.
Total colorblindness means total immunity to attacks. Otherwise, it would depend on how much color of the attack they would be able to see. They would take damage equal to the percentage of color they would be able to see. For example, if it's 25% red and no green, the victim would take 75% of the attack and the rest would return to the spot it was taken from. Thank you for the questions!
Oh okay, i understand. Very nice concept indeed.
Alright time to write another one
Stand Name: Night Prowler (AC/DC reference)
Ability: Darkness Mimicry
Desc: The user of this stand can transform their body completely into darkness/shadows. The user can assume a two-dimensional form, extend outward to become a larger shadow, blend into the darkness/shadows completely, or even teleport through them.
Form: It is a suit-type of stand. It has a form of a dark cloak that wraps around the user. Pattern of greek meandros is decorated all over the cloak, giving it a gloom and mystifying design. This cloak however, is a bound-type of stand, meaning that non-stand users can also see it.
Condition: The stand's power ability is activated when the user hides himself inside the cloak in a dark or shadowy place.
Limit: Can only be used on a dark or shadowy place, and if a dark area is being lighted or illuminated, that area is no longer accessible until that area is dark again.
Effects: When Darkness Mimicry activates, the greek meandros pattern on the cloak will radiate a faint dark grey light. He will then drown himself in the dark or any shadowy place and gain complete control and flexibility around it. (Similiar to Black Sabbath, but minus the strength, durability, and speed buff.)
Range : As far as the dark or shadowy place goes.
Stage two of the Stand: Night Prowler Back in Black (yes, another AC/DC reference.)
New Ability: Absolute Darkness
Desc: The user is able to create a field of absolute impenetrable darkness that completely negates sight and may also dull or even completely negate the other senses.
Combined with previous and new ability, if there is no dark or shadowy place surrounding the user to move around, the user can just make a new one and then assert dominance over the enemy inside it.
Condition : Has to shout "Night Prowler Back in Black" in order to activate (just like in the series).
Limit : 3 hours cooldown, and Absolute darkness only lasts for a minute. The maximum range of the field is 100 meters.
Overpowered version of the stand: Night Prowler Requiem
New Ability: Darkness Embodiment
Desc: The stand is now the physical manifestation or personification of Darkness, the all-encompassing void which acts as the counterbalance to light. The darkness manifested is made of pure negativity and lack of illumination. The user of this stand is able to essentially tapping into the core of different forms of darkness itself to assert their dominion.
No more description needed, the user of this stand is simply one with the darkness.
Condition: It's a requiem stand.
Limit : There is no limit.
This is just a long-short story about the stand user that i wrote to spend my free time. Feel free to read it, and please leave any suggestion or critic cause that may help me become better in the future.
Stand User : Razor Sedge (yet another AC/DC reference)
Razor Sedge works as a hitman.
At a cold and frightening darkness in the night with a dagger in his pocket, Razor was out to assassinate a fortune teller who is a famous celebrity that recently got his popularity from a TV show. When the perfect time to strike had come, he didnt hesitate to take that chance and ambushes him from behind. He then stabbed the fortune teller with his dagger in the back, and it goes straight to the heart. The poor fortune teller's body fell off to the ground, cold and lifeless.
The moment he thought that he had murdered his target, a hand grabbed his shoulder. Razor flinched and he was completely caught by suprise, mixed with confusion and panic. It was the fortune teller.
The should-have-been-died fortune teller then walks slowly, closing in the to the frightened hitman, and whispered
"You picked the wrong target, my dear friend".
Suddenly, Razor felt a very painful jolt in his stomach, and flew over to a nearby lamppost. A punch to the gut, physically, that comes out of nowhere.
Razor, who was almost knocked out from the sudden attack, quickly regains his balance and tried to attack the fortune teller again, only to no avail and resulted in him being flown again, this time to a wall. This time, the punch was even more powerful it broke Razor's ribs, and the hitman yelled in pain. The knife were also flown off far away.
The fortune teller then walks to the defenseless hitman. He crouches, and said to him,
"I dont want to kill you. I saw in my vision that you're the saviour. We must've been entangled by fate to meet in here. You're a hitman right? How about if i give you an arrow that holds unbelievable powers that goes beyond anyone's imaginations inside it, in exchange of leaving me alone?"
The hitman didnt believe anything about what the fortune teller said, but he would do anything to survive even if it involved some stupid fairytale things, which then he agreed to the deal.
"Very well, and it's nice to see you being a good child obeying his father's words. Here it is my dear, use it to however you like as long as you're doing it for the weak and fight for justice." said the fortune teller as he dropped an arrow like object on the floor.
"Remember, never meet me again, until fate tells me that my vision about you is correct"
The fortune teller then walks away an disappears into the darkness, completely gone in the eye. Razor then gets up and grab the unknown object, analyzing it. Confused by what it is and the origin of it, he would just put it on his pocket and waste no time to go back at his home. After all that trouble, he definitely needed some peaceful rest at home, and calm his mind down.
After a very long walk to his home, he opened the door, and was greeted by a man, currently wielding what had being seen as a knife right in front of him.
Razor, trying to solve the mystery of why there's another hitman in his house, guessed that his employer knew that Razor failed, so he hired another hitman to kill him with the sole reason of cleaning the tracks left behind.
The poor hitman who was just want to have some nice and peaceful rest, quickly lunges in front of him and tried to disarm him. The opposing hitman knew and tried to counter the attack, only to be counter-countered by Razor and the knife then dropped to the ground.
As the opposing hitman were trying to get the knife back, an idea appeared on the hitman's head, as he remembered that he had an arrow-shaped object in his pocket. He then tried to attack the opposing hitman with it, but the enemy saw him and then he kicked him off, making the hitman dropped the arrow and falling to the floor.
The opposing hitman gave up on finding the knife and grabs the arrow. He then tried to stab Razor in the chest. Razor tried to stop it, but he lacked the strength due to the previous event, and the arrow ended up stabbing him.
Seemingly successful on killing the target, the opposing hitman then waste no time to clean off the evidences, and quickly left the location.
Little did the opposing hitman know, that the arrow didnt exactly kill his target. Instead, it chooses him as a stand user.
When Razor woke up, he was greeted by dark cloak in his body. Confused, he tried to take it off, but it still stuck. He tried punching it, but it gives no effect and instead he gets hurt. When he completely covered himself using the cloak, he felt that the cloak was radiating, and then he suddenly drowns into the floor. It felt like he's invisible and intangible, and he moved freely all over the house.
When he flicked the light switch, suddenly he lost control of the power and fell to the ground. It was at this moment that he remembered what the fortune teller told him.
"Am i a saviour? Can i save people? But i'm just a hitman, how am i supposed to save people if the only thing i can do is murder?"
The thought crossed his mind, and he remembered that his main reason of being a hitman is because he was sick of those rich bastards who abuses money and slaves the weak, while getting away with it by corrupting the system. That thought then fades away when he instead started working for them, almost changed his main reason of being a hitman.
It was at this night, that marked the start of the anti-hero, who hides in the shadow and kills them who abuses the weak for their own gain. He who lives in the darkness, raising justice behind the scenes.
Razor hoped that one day he meets that fortune teller again, to thank him for returning his main purpose of being a hitman, and may even have a rematch again each other. He also hoped that he may find that employer who hired a hitman against him, and seek revenge.
(For some reason the game didn't work on my browser, so i apologize for the lack of any visual representation. Any suggestion or critic will be very helpful.)
Stand Name: Fade to Black (Metallica reference)
Ability: Event Negation
Desc: The user of this stand can take any event that has happened and revert it back to the state that it was previously in, as if the event never happened, thus effectively undoing any changes that occurred in said event. This could range from something as simple as regenerating an arm that has already been severed and incinerated and the wound already sealed off, to rejecting death itself for resurrection (similiar to GER, but without the loop).
Form: Its a humanoid that wears nothing but a black robe that covers around all the body excluding the head. It skin is a pure white (like literally white) that is covered with a black tattoo of the negation symbol (¬). On its head, it wears an executioner mask made out of newspaper filled with the same symbol that covers its skin, which almost make it looks like a black mask. Its arms and legs are made out of newspapers that are also filled with the same black symbols.
Usage: Event Negation is activated when the stand comes in contact with the affected event, area, or object (mostly by punching). The user can also control when will the stand's fist activate the ability, meaning that he can punch-barrage someone without any side effects.
Effects: When activating its ability, the symbol that covered the stand's body will also appear on the affected contact. The symbol then fades away upon post-activation. A reverse low-pitched sound of [REDACTED] will also be playing when the ability is activated.
Condition: May need to be activated voluntarily, so if the user is disabled, it cannot work or stopped working.
Limit: Can only be used on the present timeline. Events that happened in the past (already happened) or the future (not happening yet) wouldn't be able to be changed.
Range: Up to 247 meters, if the user's around.
So, it's just King Crimson, but backwards?
Well yes, but technically no, since King Crimson's power is to skip time and erase the skipped time, and can be activated freely. While King Nothing (changed to Fade To Black due to some reasons) needs to touch something in order for its power to activate.
So it would be a mixture of Echoes and Return to Zero, with being able to make contact with something and make noise (though it's only one thing), with the ability similar to RTZ, where recent events are reverted?
Oh shit so you replied to this broken stand that i made, and it was 2 weeks ago? Welp sry for not checking the notifications, but yep, the contact is the same concept as Echoes and it's ability is the same as Requiem without the loops.
Don't worry about it. Sometimes I read posts I find interesting and forget to look at the day it was posted.
"King Nothing"
*angry Norisuke Higashikata noises*
Oh shit i forgot about him. Welp, time to change the stand's name.
Stand type: punching ghost
A close range stand has a same punching power as star platinum and it look crazy diamond but the pads are triangle instead of box shape. It has slow precision but it has ability to slow down time.
Ability: slow down time only for 10 seconds. And the stand user aka jack pagas can only see in slow down time
(here i am again to show off another Stand i made, wooh!)
➟ Stand User: 「Frullata C. Zeppeli」
➟ History: Born in 1990 (17 by 2007), Frullata is the Great Granddaughter of one of Caesar A. Zeppeli's brothers. She had heard stories of her ancestors but never knew about what happened to William and Caesar Zeppeli or the Joestars.
In 1995, at the age of 5, her family's house caught fire with her miraculously being to only survivor. Soon after, she slowly began developing a Stand, most likely as "defense-mechanism" her inner spirit caused. During her time in an Orphanage, she would often not be seen for hours in the afternoon as she would sneak out and explore the town she was in,. As she got older and more recognized by the people of the town, she was given part time jobs at a few of the stores and was eventually adopted by an old couple who owned a small soup shop and started going to school.
At the age of 15, in 2005, Frullata felt compelled to go to her abandoned, burnt down house from her childhood. Whether this was out of curiosity, or a sign of her fate is uncertain, but she eventually found a relic of her ancestry: an old, damaged newspaper of Caesar Zeppeli during his time in a gang.
Piquing her curiosity for her old lineage, Frullata is now set out to investigate anybody who may have ties to the Zeppeli name to find out more about where she came from. As of 2007, she's currently interested in a Japanese Marine Biologist who's family may have come into contact with hers...
➟ Stand Name: 「Nothing Special」
➟ Stand Ability: Nothing Special has the ability to manipulate the movement of any liquid that it or Frullata come into contact with. Its most notable use of Nothing Special's ability is stopping a liquid in mid-air to create a small barrier that can slow down any projectiles coming towards her. This ability cannot change the state of the liquid and is only exclusive to the liquid state of an object.
⬇「Frullata's Appearance」⬇
Dammit, why does it have to be top tier waifu material?
srsly tho great job, cool stando and zeppeli good
Stand user: Jin Joestar (like no joke this is my real name lol)
Stand name: Stars and Stripes
Ability: can teleport objects or people to him or go to people or places if he has a photo of the person, object, or place. He need not to look at the photo just be in possession of the photo.
Power A
Speed A
Range C
Durability A
Precision B
Potential A
Can you somehow green screen the background?
Stand Name: Court of The Crimson King
Stand User : Mujitsu Nochi
Power: C
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: D
Precision: E
Potential: D
Stand Power : A Automatic Colony Stand That Latches onto somebody and starts taking blood to heal the user, however this is not by the users will and the user has no will to live.
I love it! It's like Harvest with a slight vampiric touch to it, amazing!
Looks pretty epic,but for the 5th act,i'm just saying,but shouldn't the potential for the last act be at E,or does it go on forever?
The reason the potential is infinity is Act 5's power is Power Mimicry but the potential will be become E when i have finished over heaven version of Quinquennium.
15 Miles!? As in.. A 79,200 Feet Range? NANI!?!
I had originally planned for a mere 4000 meters
What is your stand's weaknesses?
Its physical stats are A, A, C, B, C, A
So average range and precision
so does that mean that the world would be better than it? because it has better stats.
15 miles....... B in range, ok, totally fine)
Description:
This stand, named for one of Stevie Wonder's greatest songs, takes the appearance of a tall (almost 9 1/2 feet) figure in dark armor and a white turban who wields a long (about 4 feet) sword in each hand. Born from its user's dissatisfaction with his shortcomings and subsequent developing of his god complex, it is a terrifying stand in close quarters. Due to its ability to wield its swords with uncanny precision and coupled with its user's high intelligence and logically calculating way of thinking, it is not to be underestimated.
User:
Name: Zahi Rashid
Age: 16
Height 6' 3"
Weight: 141 lbs
Occupation: Student
Hair color: Black, wavy
Eyes: Dark brown
Race: Mixed
Hobbies: Gaming, puzzles, cricket
IQ: At least mid-high 120s, upper limit mid 130s
Good,10/10
ok
Stand Name: The Fallen Angel
Stand User: Akuma Kuchiku-kan ( a.k.a. Devil Destroyer)
Power: E
Speed: E
Range: A
Durability: A
Precision: C
Potiential: D
daz realy cool
thanks